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[stillane]

So... if I had, you know, hypothetically speaking, maybe written bandslash of a Fall Out Boy nature... like, a hypothetical 7 pages or so of it... uh, would there be anyone out there willing to read over it and say things like, "Huh. Yeah, that doesn't work"? Or possibly, "WTF were you thinking?" Or, "A comma would be nice here."

Or even, "Hey, nifty."

Anyone? I have about a scene and a half to go, hopefully to be finished tomorrow.

New characters make me nervous. Also, RPS = huh. *headdesk*

Help?

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Saw this browsing friendsfriends...

[terribilita.livejournal.com]

...so I hope you don't mind my comment.

I'm inching my way into bandom as well, so I'd be happy to take a look at this for you, if, you know, you're OK with a stranger looking at it and someone on your friend's list doesn't volunteer. :)

Re: Saw this browsing friendsfriends...

[stillane.livejournal.com]

Eeee! Thank you! I will definately take you up on that, most likely sometime later tonight. I'm guessing your email is in your info?

Re: Saw this browsing friendsfriends...

[terribilita.livejournal.com]

You're very welcome! Just go ahead and send it to terribilita at livejournal.

[babelmira.livejournal.com]

Going over to the dark side?

I'll be there with some Jared/Sandra

[stillane.livejournal.com]

*snort* On my desktop, it's currently titled, "Bandslash A.K.A. Hand Me A Handbasket"

Yeah. Sign me up, Skywalker.

[babelmira.livejournal.com]

Hah. My folder is "Handbasket! Wheeee!"

[feartheotter.livejournal.com]

... terrifying as it may be on several levels, you've piqued my curiosity m'dear.

[stillane.livejournal.com]

I... yeah. Um.

It's not entirely my fault, really. They make it so damned easy. Seriously. One of the least suggestive clips of these guys involves a slow breast exam. The mind boggles.

At least there is no Jackie Chan?

[feartheotter.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank crimeny for that. Hehe. Once you've been subjected to more than one Jackie Chan album... eeeps.

And it's true, they do definitely make it easy. Honestly, my mind is already going to all sorts of weird and mildly uncomfortable places. :x I should get a handle on that...

ANNNNNNNYWAY, how're you?