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[stillane]

So... if I had, you know, hypothetically speaking, maybe written bandslash of a Fall Out Boy nature... like, a hypothetical 7 pages or so of it... uh, would there be anyone out there willing to read over it and say things like, "Huh. Yeah, that doesn't work"? Or possibly, "WTF were you thinking?" Or, "A comma would be nice here."

Or even, "Hey, nifty."

Anyone? I have about a scene and a half to go, hopefully to be finished tomorrow.

New characters make me nervous. Also, RPS = huh. *headdesk*

Help?

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Saw this browsing friendsfriends...

[terribilita.livejournal.com]

...so I hope you don't mind my comment.

I'm inching my way into bandom as well, so I'd be happy to take a look at this for you, if, you know, you're OK with a stranger looking at it and someone on your friend's list doesn't volunteer. :)

[babelmira.livejournal.com]

Going over to the dark side?

I'll be there with some Jared/Sandra

[feartheotter.livejournal.com]

... terrifying as it may be on several levels, you've piqued my curiosity m'dear.