Is there a beta in the house?

[stillane]

More than a year and thirty-odd pages later, I think this thing may finally be done. As a bonus, it might even be coherent this time. Any of you up for telling me whether that's just wishful thinking?

What, you want actual details? Oh, fine then. It's SG:A, John/Rodney, and going on 12,000 words. Some of you might even have seen it before, back when it was going by the name Inhibitions. (Which it still kind of is.)

So, any takers? Please?

Comments

[20thcenturyvole.livejournal.com]

Ooh! I'd be interested!

[stillane.livejournal.com]

Whee! Thank you! I'll ship it over as soon as I get through one more read through to ensure a lack of overt stupidity. *g*

[terribilita.livejournal.com]

Ahaahah. This just reminds me about what a crazy self-editor you are. :>

[stillane.livejournal.com]

Heh. This one is too long for me to be good at it, though. I keep wandering off mid-read to amuse myself. *g*

[terribilita.livejournal.com]

Eee! New fic from you! *twirls you* &hearts

If you need a second pair of eyes I'm available as well.

[stillane.livejournal.com]

A second pair of eyes is always appreciated, and especially when they're yours. It'll be on its way momentarily, since I've given up on the pretense I can stare at it any more. :P

(Also: oh, the irony. I had to edit the comment. *snort*)

[enname.livejournal.com]

What... you mean it is finished???? *checks herself for grey hairs* Finished and I am not eighty years old? *checks for four horse men and an angel weilding a flaming sword*

It seems you have many readers, so I will just sit here in astonished awe. :P

[stillane.livejournal.com]

Smartass. :P

Yep, it's done. (I think.) I wound up going back and doing exactly what I said I was not going to do and making it more linear, largely because when I came back to it even I couldn't figure out what the hell was going on. On the plus side, your in media res idea and the wonky in-and-out style from the original edition got cannibalized into a different fic, and that one seems to take to both fairly naturally. Or, you know, at least it doesn't leave me blinking with confusion. *g*

Although, the angel with the pointy flamethrower might be kind of awesome to see...

[enname.livejournal.com]

Finished and I the show itself hasn't ended. I've changed my mind, doomsday has come!

*ducks*

Bwahaha. Glad to see that you got two stories out of it even, and aha! I was not the only one who sort of went 'bzuh?' over what precisely was going on there. Yay for sense making. Long may it roam.

Mmm. I get the feeling as it makes the rivers run molten, that it is a might big pointy flame thrower too.

[tacittype.livejournal.com]

Several hours later - do you need another set of eyes? Or are you set?

[stillane.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm always glad for more eyes. (Which... sounds kind of creepy, really. Huh.)

If you've got an email I can ship it to, I'll send it your way.

[tacittype.livejournal.com]

Great! ::cracks knuckles::

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