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So... if I had, you know, hypothetically speaking, maybe written bandslash of a Fall Out Boy nature... like, a hypothetical 7 pages or so of it... uh, would there be anyone out there willing to read over it and say things like, "Huh. Yeah, that doesn't work"? Or possibly, "WTF were you thinking?" Or, "A comma would be nice here."

Or even, "Hey, nifty."

Anyone? I have about a scene and a half to go, hopefully to be finished tomorrow.

New characters make me nervous. Also, RPS = huh. *headdesk*

Help?