He whispers Jesus, and it isn’t a prayer, but it isn’t blasphemy either. It’s relief and some small bit of thanks, and maybe it’s a little holy after all.
That's a stellar line.
And the idea of a renegade forklift is great (and, you know, terrifying).
I like the pacing of this, the action at the beginning and the slower middle really work with the payoff at the end.
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Date: 2006-03-02 06:16 pm (UTC)That's a stellar line.
And the idea of a renegade forklift is great (and, you know, terrifying).
I like the pacing of this, the action at the beginning and the slower middle really work with the payoff at the end.