So, anybody up for some beta'ing?

Well, the biochem beast has been butchered again. Okay, that may be taking alliteration too far, but that class deserves some rather violent imagery. I'm still torn on whether to refer to it as The Land of Pain or The Bane of My Existance. In any case, another exam is done and gone, and I think my brain is rebelling from all the science with fic.

I've been working on this one off and on for a while now, but it's been especially insistant tonight. Given the fact that I'm doped to the gills on cold meds, though, I'm hesitant to trust in my own judgement. Anyone willing to read over the bits as they appear? Right now, I'm getting a scene at a time, in no particular order (and, yes, this is how they all start in my world, rather than a symptom of better living through chemistry). It's - surprise, surprise - McShep, no ep spoilers thus far, about 2,000 words at this point. So, any takers?


I'd be eternally grateful.

ETA: Houston, we have an ending. Now it just needs (roughly) two sex scenes, some induction of pain, and knicknacks, paddywack. Not necessarily in that order.

ETA2: Knicknacks have been achieved. I think that's it for tonight, baring unforeseen insomnia/strikes of creative genius.