Very cool. I know your stuff from Stargate, so I was sure this would be good, and I wasn't disappointed. for a little concrit: I figured out that James was occupying Dean's body when he looked down at hands that weren't his own, but then I lost the thread and got confused when Dean started running and James could see him. I didn't quite catch the moment where James fell out of him. But that was a teenie little blip in a fascinating story that should be typed up as a teleplay and sent to Kripke. Seriously.
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Date: 2007-04-28 11:44 pm (UTC)Icarus