Yes, indeed, touching is always of the good. I really wanted it to be rather more X-rated touching, possibly of the claiming sex variety, but McKay wasn't about to go there yet. Oh well. Maybe I'll find a way of writing that scene eventually. I haven't figured out how to get them from here to there yet, though.
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Date: 2006-01-15 11:07 pm (UTC)Glad you liked it, and thank you!