He whispers Jesus, and it isn’t a prayer, but it isn’t blasphemy either. It’s relief and some small bit of thanks, and maybe it’s a little holy after all.

That's a stellar line.

And the idea of a renegade forklift is great (and, you know, terrifying).

I like the pacing of this, the action at the beginning and the slower middle really work with the payoff at the end.